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2.0 out of 5 starsMeh
Reviewed in Canada on August 16, 2021
Predictable story. Endless, surprisingly dry smut. Bizarre attempt at writing poetry that was
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Good.
Had no idea what these ppl saw in each other beyond physical attraction, though she could have been Snuffleupagus for all the non-description.
Uncomfortably close brother sister relationship and porny step-siblings made this reader uncomfortable, and unhappy.
80 YO appallingly described as shuffling, wheezing, drooling virtual hobo. He is the best character. Let that sink in.
Characters are 23/24 and have no cultural context or frames of reference beyond vague mention of “sports.”
They are dumb as rocks and duller but if you like soft, very soft core smut and being hammered with the idea that the HEART and MIND are, gasp! different entities, this is the overpriced little tale is for you!
