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Reviewed in Canada 🇨🇦 on February 26, 2023
The first chapter was riveting. And then…
They built a house. A family grows. A child dies. Friendships are destroyed.
Infidelity. Racism. Other stuff.
Who are these characters? Why are they here?
Someone from Japan enters the story. People keep dying. Stories lay unresolved. The characters become pedantic. The house’s new tenants rearrange the furniture. A jogger runs by with water bottles, hugging their thigh (or something like that). A nosey neighbour.
Another page. Introspection. Two vehicles collide.
And then…
It’s been 10 years since 9/11 - was mentioned; so is Aids.
Why is 9/11 mentioned?
Back to the Vehicles Colliding
The last thing he saw was MERCURY.
If it was the last thing he saw, how do we find out?
Someone smokes weed, or does heroin, or cocaine, or…
I’m being mean.
I’m confused. No, I’m not.
I read the acknowledgments.
I rarely read the acknowledgments.
Writing is hard.
The book’s layout is good.
WRITTEN: 26 Feb 2023
They built a house. A family grows. A child dies. Friendships are destroyed.
Infidelity. Racism. Other stuff.
Who are these characters? Why are they here?
Someone from Japan enters the story. People keep dying. Stories lay unresolved. The characters become pedantic. The house’s new tenants rearrange the furniture. A jogger runs by with water bottles, hugging their thigh (or something like that). A nosey neighbour.
Another page. Introspection. Two vehicles collide.
And then…
It’s been 10 years since 9/11 - was mentioned; so is Aids.
Why is 9/11 mentioned?
Back to the Vehicles Colliding
The last thing he saw was MERCURY.
If it was the last thing he saw, how do we find out?
Someone smokes weed, or does heroin, or cocaine, or…
I’m being mean.
I’m confused. No, I’m not.
I read the acknowledgments.
I rarely read the acknowledgments.
Writing is hard.
The book’s layout is good.
WRITTEN: 26 Feb 2023
