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Customer Review

Reviewed in Canada 🇨🇦 on June 15, 2022
This is a good story. But…

I’ve taught high school English lit students with better grammar and word use. If someone edited this, get a better editor for the sequel.

There is a deluge of Middle Eastern words that aren’t in the Kindle dictionary or any standard dictionary. I suppose it adds exotica, but the frequency is overdone.

It seems to follow the typical exasperating student error of using a thesaurus without a deep grasp of the connotations. He chooses the synonym that isn’t a more exact word, just a more unusual word so it is just awkward.

A good editor could greatly improve this work.
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