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This one was fun! I enjoyed the character classes, very inventive system. Also, most importantly I liked the fmc. It was nice to have a badass female main character who was also humorous and enjoying chaos. My dnd character also loves punching, so yay!
I like the characters. The world building feels a bit lacking. Sort of scattered everywhere but the second issue is more realistic due to the isakai nature so not really a negative. I do think more overall world building should be prioritized. The MC has learned basically nothing about the world and just keeps stumbling about like an incompetent. Some of the power doesn't really feel earned or found just given which is frustrating since it could certainly be better done by the author. They have shown the ability but it fluctuates regularly in quality, a symptom of royal road I've noticed from other books that come from there.
Overall a good read but could use improvement from a readers perspective.
Uses positive parts of litrpg without suffering from the negatives: It's more of a mechanism for the writer to get the story started imo, is explained in-story as how individuals interpret magic, and the importance of numbers diminishes as the heroine begins to actually understand how things work. This is a story, not just reading someone play a video game.
Chapters 150 to 200 (ish) are significantly darker than the rest of the story, but it returns to normal and remains that way afterwards.
I read original web novel, technically not Amazon version. I devoured all nearly 900 chapters that were available when I found the series, almost non-stop until caught up. I eagerly await all new chapters.
This story is in my hall of fame for best stories I've ever read.
The flow is good. The writing is good. The psychological aspect of the mc is going steady. There is no teenagers idea and hormonal language. The skill are going up a little like he who fight monster. an other really good series by the way! Start reading it and prepare for sleepless night. 20h readind!!!
The original web series was a wonderful story. A fantastic main character, well-developed side characters, enjoyable storyline, and an excellent progression system.
This novel takes everything that was good about the original story and improves it, tightening up plotlines and correcting all the little errors that sneak into a self-published work. I am very much looking forward to all the sequels still to come.
The greatest compliment I can give any author is that I want them to write more of a story. This is certainly the case here with this superlative first book. Wonderful world imagery and characters. I have a thing for strong women leads and this one certainly delivers!!
Very fun and entertaining read! I’ve been following this on RR since the begining, and its great to see it as a novel . I purchased this, and will purchase the next installements…also got the audiobook…worth it IMO
One of the first web serials I ever read, and still my all time favorite. So excited to see this published to everyone! Amazing book with a fast pace and an interesting MC. The story only ramps up from here, can't wait for book 2!